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blacksmith
15-01-2006, 21:04
I drew this picture a long time ago. It was meant to be an artistic representaion of the lord and lt of my iron warriors army. I never got round to finishing the picture completely but I thought id share it with you all anyway. The pictures are taken with my cam because I dont have a scanner so I hope they come out ok.

Heres the big picture (http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a4/blacksmith5/TT.jpg), the lord (http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a4/blacksmith5/lord2.jpg) it was representing, and a close up of the lord drawing (http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a4/blacksmith5/RT.jpg)and the lt drawing (http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a4/blacksmith5/LT.jpg).

Enjoy

Izram
16-01-2006, 17:06
The picture could use some contrast to see whats actually there, its a bit dull (thats a problem with the scanner or camara, not the artist :P)

I like the drawing, especially the pipes and tubes. Very nice work there, and on the gun.

What could use work are the general proportions and perspective. Look at the clw on the lord mocel, then at his feet. Then look at the claw on the frawing and then at his feet. there is a discrepency there that I personally don't like (I am not an advocate for oversized boots). His right leg, the one swept behind, is at an odd angle as well, in a way unatural to walking (especially witht hat armor on). I imagine it would look more natural to be on an angle facing away from the foward angle.

His gun arm is odd as well, apparantly missing the arm between the chest and the forearm.

other than those thing, which for me bring the level of the drawing down, its very cool stuff. Its not easy to draw terminators and the picture shows effort and skill. Maybe some shading or coloring to bring this line drawing to life? It just seems flat without any value on the surfaces.

of course, you did say this was from a while back, so I doubt you will go back to it. I would like to see some of your recent work.

FearFrost
17-01-2006, 04:51
The left one looks frickin awesome..the right figure has some serious proportion issues with it's arms. They seem small and the foreshortening is off.

Really nice linework, great details.

Calgar
17-01-2006, 07:59
Damnit, the Lord is soooo nice!!!!