Bmaxwell
01-06-2005, 00:14
this is the start of a story that is a prequel to a much large movie script I am wirteing called "Faith" haven't figured out what to call this so if you guys have suggestions and comments please put them
The wind blows, tree’s move, leaves fall
And I see the pattern.
I have found him
The ascendant
The record screams like the vinyl is being torn apart. Lance goes to the player and takes what’s left form the record player and holds it in his hands. The room is moist and dark and warms much like a vital organ. He looks ate the candles. He realizes that he has been in the room for days maybe a week the wax has dripped to the floor and has made mounds of red wax he looks at the candles with a strong glare and a slight sparkle of white light in his mind and the candle goes out he shuts the door.
Walking to the edge of the window he looks out. He woke up just in time the demolitions are just about to take place he grabs his cane. While having a strong physique the strain on his mind comes out and toils on him like a slow dripping faucet. He looks out and sees that no one can see him. Time to go
“All right you can hit it”
the foremen says to the demolitions squad the explosions start to rock the building imploding form the inside out no one sees the man in the window that stands there while the building crumbles
Just as soon the explosion’s come to the room next to lance all that is left is the imprint in the dust form his feet and cane.
He must be found
I know
He’s near you find him then tell me what you find out
Yes mentor.
The wind blows, tree’s move, leaves fall
And I see the pattern.
I have found him
The ascendant
The record screams like the vinyl is being torn apart. Lance goes to the player and takes what’s left form the record player and holds it in his hands. The room is moist and dark and warms much like a vital organ. He looks ate the candles. He realizes that he has been in the room for days maybe a week the wax has dripped to the floor and has made mounds of red wax he looks at the candles with a strong glare and a slight sparkle of white light in his mind and the candle goes out he shuts the door.
Walking to the edge of the window he looks out. He woke up just in time the demolitions are just about to take place he grabs his cane. While having a strong physique the strain on his mind comes out and toils on him like a slow dripping faucet. He looks out and sees that no one can see him. Time to go
“All right you can hit it”
the foremen says to the demolitions squad the explosions start to rock the building imploding form the inside out no one sees the man in the window that stands there while the building crumbles
Just as soon the explosion’s come to the room next to lance all that is left is the imprint in the dust form his feet and cane.
He must be found
I know
He’s near you find him then tell me what you find out
Yes mentor.