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TheeForsakenOne
22-08-2005, 21:47
Here is a story I'm currently working on. This is my second draft.

I think there is room for improvement but I'm having trouble seeing it so any tips or constructive criticism would be apprecitated

http://atlas.walagata.com/w/theforsakenone/The_First_Chronicles_of_Avialle_-_Burning_Vengeance_-_Final.doc

TheeForsakenOne
29-08-2005, 20:46
Is it so popular that everyone is speechless? ;)