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    A Matter of Honour

    Scout-Sergeant Zedef emerged from the ruined manufactorium into the gloomy daylight. He did not stop to take his bearings until he was safely in the cover of a huge cargo hauler. The flatbed truck was partially loaded with sleek groundcars that the manufactorium had, until recently, produced. He noted that the freight yard outside the factory was half-full of the haulers, some fuller than others. Each one cast haphazard shadows as the mid-morning sun streamed through them, shadows that offered concealment for him and his scouts.

    Zedef glanced back to see Ezri and Osher, the last two scouts remaining in his squad, follow him out of the bombed-out building and take up positions near him. He was pleased to see them choosing suitable cover. Ezri immediately set his heavy bolter on its bipod, preparing to fire at any threat that might appear. Zedef’s ears picked up a series of soft clicks as Osher loaded more shells into his combat shotgun. The sergeant was proud of the way that they were holding up, but his pride did not outweigh his grief. Zedef gritted his teeth and silently cursed the foul xenos that had killed seven of his boys in less than an hour. Damned tyranids!

    “Any contacts to our rear, boy?” Zedef asked.

    Scout Osher, who had been taking up the rear, answered him quietly, “None, sergeant. We lost them in the building.”

    “Keep your ears open and report at the first sign that they’ve found us again.”

    “Yes, sergeant.”

    Zedef studied the urban terrain before him and worked out a path that would offer the most concealment.

    “You two stay here for a minute,” he ordered. “I’m going to get clear of all this metal and try raising our forces.”

    With that, Sergeant Zedef started picking his way down the row of parked cargo haulers. The cover they provided was not perfect, but two hundred and twenty years in the scout company of the Brotherhood of a Thousand had made Zedef a master of stealth. He reached the last hauler without any sign that he had drawn attention. Zedef took a knee at the front of the cab, carefully shifting his sheathed chainsword so that it would not bang against the vehicle’s metal side, and slowly leaned his head out past the truck to study the street beyond. He noticed that the area beyond the loading yard was more intact than the manufactorium had been and positively pristine in comparison to the edges of the city where heavy artillery had been used to keep the tyranids at bay. Zedef’s squad had been patrolling the no-man’s land when the xenos had ambushed them. Zedef looked over the light industrial area for several long seconds before deciding that its factories and worker habitation blocks were clear of tyranids. The sergeant drew back into cover and twisted the controls of his vox transceiver, dialing in a longer-range frequency.

    Zedef’s ear was immediately assaulted by static and other sounds associated with overloaded circuits. It was the same noise he had heard every time he had tried to raise Imperial forces in the last forty minutes. Zedef had hoped it was mostly interference that would calm down when he found a better point from which to transmit, but as he worked to refine the signal Zedef realized that atmospheric radiation and radio-obscuring structures were not the problem. Something major was going down and the forces of the Imperium were in confusion. The sergeant decided to try a tighter wave. It would have less range, but it might be cleaner. For a moment the chaos in his headset receded and Zedef jumped at the chance.

    “This is Sergeant Barnabus Zedef,” he said, pressing the transmit key. “I am calling any Imperial Guard or Brotherhood of a Thousand forces. Is anyone receiving this transmission?” Zedef waited a moment for a response. He looked back over his shoulder to check on his scouts and decided that he would repeat his call a couple of times before moving on to find a better place to try again. He saw that Osher and Ezri had followed his instructions to the letter; both scouts were exactly as he had left them.

    The sergeant reached to key another vox transmission, but something stayed his hand. Zedef knew how he had left Ezri and the scout had not moved, but something had changed. Zedef had just begun to see that the shadows around the young scout had shifted when he heard Osher shout.

    “Sergeant, above you!”

    Zedef’s hand sped toward his holstered bolt pistol as he turned to look. A trail of slime leaked from the end of a writhing feeder tendril onto the sergeant’s shoulder pad as Zedef looked into the lictor’s face. How the xenos lurker had come to perch on the cab of the cargo hauler without him noticing, Zedef would never know, but he did know the lictor’s descending scything talon would cut him in two before his pistol could even clear its holster. Zedef gritted his teeth.

    In a burst of gore the left side of the tyranid creature’s chest exploded. Half a heartbeat later, so did its head. As the lictor’s carcass fell to the ground, Zedef’s sensitive ears heard two distant, but sharp cracks of gunfire. He knew the effects and reports of Astartes-issue sniper rifles when he witnessed them and Zedef immediately barked into his vox.

    “This is Sergeant Zedef. Whoever fired those shots, identify yourselves!” Ezri and Osher ran up beside him as he waited for a response. He was about to berate them for leaving cover without orders, but stopped when a reply sounded in his ear.

    “Sergeant Zedef, this is Scout Tsabar. We are on the roof of a building about a kilometer north of you.”

    Zedef pulled out his binoculars. “Acknowledged, Tsabar. Good shooting,” he said as he started scanning the structures to the north. “Does your position have any identifiers?” he asked. They all looked the same to him.

    “Water tower,” Tsabar immediately answered, keeping his transmissions short like a good scout.

    Zedef continued to search, wondering which of his fellow scout-sergeants this Tsabar belonged to. He did not ask of course. The vox was for orders and reports, not conversations. The water tower was easy to pick out. It perched on top of a building with a sign that said Adullam’s Tool and Die. He did not see the snipers until a flash of light caught his eye and drew it to the narrow walkway that circled the big water tank. Zedef could barely make out the forms of two scouts who hunched under camouflage cloaks and held their rifles at the ready. Zedef would have seen them eventually, but the flash from the signaling mirror had helped speed things up.

    “I’ve got you, Tsabar,” Zedef said. He was about to ask the scout if he had been able to make contact with other friendlies, but before he could he heard an unpleasant sound from the direction of the manufactorium. It was the scratch of tyranid claws on permacrete.

    “The ‘gaunts are back, sergeant!” Osher had heard it too. His shotgun boomed.

    Zedef knew before he looked that the three of them would not be able to stand against the mob of xenos that poured out of the building, laying sight on the tyranids only confirmed it. Scout Ezri raised his heavy bolter, but the sergeant gave him a shove that turned him towards the street.

    “Go!” Zedef shouted. He had lost seven of his boys already. He was not letting the tyranids have the last two so easily. “Head for the water tower!”

    Osher’s shotgun boomed again as Ezri ran off and Zedef realized that the scout was not following his orders. He grabbed Osher by the collar of his carapace armor and gave him a strong shake.

    “Listen to me, boy,” Zedef said once he had Osher‘s full attention. “Follow Ezri. I’ll be right behind.”

    As the scout finally went after the other Zedef dropped his binoculars and drew his bolt pistol and chainsword. He turned to face the mob of termagaunts as the air around him filled with abominations from their strange weapons. The sergeant raised his gun and started to even the odds with well-placed shots, but there were so many. A fleshborer beetle penetrated the ceramite plate over his thigh and Zedef grimaced as the living projectile began eating into his quadriceps. A pair of hormagaunts came into the loading yard and leaped over their brethren as the sergeant’s pistol ran dry. Zedef cast it aside and revved his chainsword. With the last moment he could spare, Zedef shouted out his Chapter’s warcry.

    “A Thousand for the Emperor!”
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Stay tuned for more!

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    "A THOUSAND FOR THE EMPEROR!!" good battle cry methinks. im staying tuned dont you worry haha
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Looks very promising, I'll stay tuned (and subscribed) !!
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Thanks for reading, guys. I hope not to disappoint in the future.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Looks like a great start to another story, Bragg.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Quote Originally Posted by spacemonkey View Post
    Looks like a great start to another story, Bragg.
    Thanks. I promise that there will be more coming, but it might take a few days. I have a first draft of the entire story, but it is written-out longhand and may take some time to get typed up for posting.
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    Looks good so far, will keep an eye on this methinks.
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    Zedef’s final shout made Scout Osher look back over his shoulder. The place that he had been left was obscured by one of the cargo haulers, but he could see it swarmed with ‘gaunts and he could hear a keening chainsword. Osher had been a scout for eight years and Barnabus Zedef had always been his squad leader. Now Osher’s desire to help his sergeant, to die at his side, warred with his sense of duty in carrying out Zedef’s final order. The scout’s feet kept propelling him toward the sniper team’s location, but faltered when the sound of the sergeant’s chainsword suddenly stopped.

    “Come on, Osher!” Ezri cried from in front of him. “We have to link up with the others.”

    Osher made up his mind ad kept running. Ezri was young, less than five years a scout. Sergeant Zedef had given his life to keep his last two scouts alive and Osher would do what was best for his last remaining comrade. Right now that meant sticking with him.

    Shots rang out from the snipers on the water tower as the scouts passed what Osher estimated to be the halfway point of their run. Osher glanced back and saw that the tyranids had emerged from behind the cargo haulers and immediately turned to follow them. Another volley from the snipers whined over his head and Osher watched the heavy bullets tear a couple of ‘guants apart, but the rest swarmed past their dead. Several hormaguants quickly bounded ahead of the loping termagaunts and took the lead in their pursuit. Osher yelled at Ezri to pick up the pace. The scouts had a decent lead, but the xenos had already started to gain. Osher said a short, silent prayer to the Emperor and asked for the strength to carry out Zedef’s last orders.
    Last edited by Try Again Bragg; 27-03-2009 at 23:30.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    So it continues.
    Maybe its just me but 30 years seems like a long time to be scout. I always got the impression that most scouts advanced to full brother within 10 years.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Yes, it continues. Sorry for the long pause and the short addition. I have been busy teaching (third quarter is a drag) and I have also been really into 4th Ed. D&D lately. I am running a game here on the boards and IRL.

    Yeah, when I was typing it yesterday the thirty years thing bothered me too. I have edited it to read eight years instead. Thinking back, I believe that I was trying to make it work in the long life-span that marines can have. If you live to be several centuries old, 30 years wouldn't be much.
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    With their triple lungs burning and double hearts beating furiously Osher and Ezri reached Adullam’s Tool and Die. The snipers above covered them the entire way, but the tyranids were right on their heels. The machine shop had a rusty metal ladder attached to its side to serve as a simple fire escape. Ezri reached it first and immediately began to climb. His heavy support weapon banged against his hp as it hung from its strap. As he waited for his scout-brother to make room for him on the ladder, Osher armed a grenade and tossed it at the tyranids. He had a small sense of satisfaction as the explosive detonated in their midst and hurled several broken ‘gaunts into the air.

    As soon as he could, Osher slung his shotgun across his back and started hauling himself up the old ladder. It immediately began to shudder under the weight of the two scouts. Osher looked up to check on Ezri only to be hit with a face full of rusty metal flakes that had been kicked free by Ezri’s boots. Osher spat and cursed and blinked hard and continued to climb as quickly as possible.

    Ezri had just cleared the top of the fire escape and scrambled onto the building’s roof when more than half of the straining brackets that held the ladder to the wall gave way. Scout Osher lost his footing as the fire escape twisted and bent away from the wall with a terrible screech of tortured metal. Osher looked down past his dangling legs and saw that the tyranids had reached the bottom of Adullam’s Tool and Die and were scrabbling at the brick, trying to find enough purchase to climb. The rung Osher held onto with both hands began to warp under his weight and he knew that in a few seconds he would be falling right into the ‘nids’ gaping, fanged mouths. Osher hoped that they would choke.

    “Climb, brother!”

    Osher looked up and saw his scout-brother leaning far out over the edge of the rook, hand outstretched, but still a meter from his.

    “You can take my hand if you pull yourself up a rung,” Ezri encouraged.

    Osher gritted his teeth and pulled, but it was not a matter of strength, his enhanced muscles were more than up to the task. The problem was the corroded metal of the rung that threatened to give way at the slightest shift of his weight. Osher took a risk and reached for the next rung. His fingers closed on the rusty rung just as the one that had been holding all of his weight broke in two. The new rung immediately began to bend as Osher’s free hand flailed for Ezri’s. More of the ladder’s brackets gave way as their fingers brushed and Osher swung out further away from the side of the building. The hanging scout kicked his legs out toward the building. The motion weakened his grip, but Osher felt that the move had kept him from never swinging back toward the building at all.

    As his fingers finally slipped from the rung, Osher thrust out his other hand and for a split second, there was nothing keeping him from plummeting to his death, and then Ezri’s hand closed around his, the strength of its grip reassuring. Osher’s weight almost pulled them both over the edge, but Ezri grunted and hauled him up. Osher was able to help a bit, but it was really Ezri who pulled him to safety. They fell down on to the roof once Osher was up and spent a moment sucking in lungfuls of air.

    “Thank you, brother,” Osher said between pants as he lay on his belly. He reached out and put his hand on the other scout’s shoulder.
    Last edited by Try Again Bragg; 28-04-2009 at 16:49. Reason: Added a little.
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    Ezri was also winded, but found the energy to sit up. His head came level with the short wall around the edge of the roof just in time to lock eyes with a hormagaunt that had climbed up the wall. The xenos beast snarled at him as it hooked its scything talons over the edge and pulled itself halfway up. With scant seconds to act before the tyranid pounced on him, Ezri grabbed the shotgun strapped to Osher’s back and fired one-handed just as the hormagaunt struck. Half the alien’s head was blasted away and Osher grunted in pain as the discharge scorched his trousers.

    “Sorry, brother,” Ezri said as relief swept through him and he dropped the shotgun. He got to his feet and another tyranid head appeared over the edge of the roof. Ezri kicked its hideous face with a heavy combat boot. As he watched it fall to the ground below, Ezri grabbed his heavy bolter and began raining destruction down on the tyranids.

    Several more ‘gaunts had climbed the building’s wall and he knocked them back down with controlled bursts of explosive bolts from his weapon. Osher appeared next to him and added his shotgun’s firepower to the fight. Ezri was trying to be judicious, but he was having trouble restraining himself from hosing the aliens and wasting the last of his ammunition. It became even harder when the termagaunts on the ground began firing back, their fleshborer rounds streaked past him or smashed into the building.

    “Hey!” called a voice that was not Osher’s. “Use these!”

    The shout had caught Ezri between bursts and he tore his eyes from the xenos below to glance up at the water tower. One of the snipers was holding out a belt of grenades, preparing to drop them to the scouts below.

    “I’ll get them,” Osher said. He paused in the middle of reloading his shotgun and turned to catch the belt as it fell.

    Ezri kept firing and blew a termagaunt apart while Osher took a knee beside him and started priming and dropping grenades, one-by-one, over the side of the roof. Adullum’s Tool and Die was rocked by the resulting series of explosions that killed at least a dozen tyranids and caused them to scatter.

    “Look to the sky!” yelled the voice Ezri now recognized as belonging to one of the sniper scouts. He and Osher looked up and their eyes widened. Above and behind them, sniper rifles began to crack with repeated shots. They had found more threatening target than anything on the ground.

    The gargoyle flock dove at the roof and their bioweapons spat. In the couple of seconds that he watched the xenos before Osher pulled him into cover beneath the water tower, Ezri saw two of the winged tyranids get his by the sniper’s heavy bullets, but two was not nearly enough. Bio-munitions struck the steel girders of the tower that surrounded them and a few droplets of tyranid acid stung Ezri’s cheek, but none hit the scouts directly. The stinging pain was merely a distraction; Ezri was much more concerned about the snipers up on the tower. He was below them and could not see what was going on, but he could only hear one sniper rifle firing, the other had been replaced by the bangs of a rapid-fired bolt pistol.

    There was a sudden scream from up above and Ezri glanced skyward just in time to watch one of the sniper’s bodies fall from their perch, trailing organs from its slashed gut, and slam into the roof. A moment later there was another yell and a severed hand, still clutching a bolt pistol, fell from the tower. Ezri could not hide any longer. He shouted a curse at all xenos as he charged from the tower’s base and searched the sky for targets.
    Last edited by Try Again Bragg; 29-04-2009 at 16:01. Reason: Added a lot.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Sorry that it has been so long between updates. I hope that people are still reading. I just added some more to the last post.
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    Still reading and enjoying it so far.
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    The gargoyle flock, finished with the snipers, flapped away from the water tower and into the air. They began to wheel about as shells from Ezri’s heavy bolter killed one of their number.

    “You certainly got their attention,” Osher said grimly.

    The gargoyles had come around and were beginning their dive toward the scouts. Ezri glanced from the body of the sniper who had fallen from the tower up to the other, who lay dead on the walkway circling the water tank.

    “I wonder if they were in contact with any of our forces,” he said.

    “Who knows,” Osher responded. He raised his weapon and sighted down the barrel. “I wonder if there are any of our forces left.”

    Ezri braced himself and opened fire again. “I guess we’ll never know,” he shouted over the sound of the gun blasts. He held down the trigger and sprayed heavy shells into the diving xenos. Twelve rounds left the gun in rapid succession and killed three gargoyles before the heavy bolter finally ran empty. After a few dry clicks from its firing mechanism, Ezri lowered the weapon and slapped at the quick-release latches that secured the bolter’s sling to his harness.

    As Ezri’s gun fell to the roof, Osher stepped up next to his scout-brother and fired his shotgun at the gargoyles as rapidly as possible. Several fell out of the sky, dead or wounded, but there were still a dozen alive and fighting when they finally reached the scouts.

    Ezri had drawn his combat knife. As a tyranid flew at him, he stabbed the blade into it. The gargoyle hit him with great force and both went down in a tangle of limbs wings and claws. Ezri wound up beneath the alien, but had retained his knife and head the presence of mind to plunge it into the beast several times before the xenos could attack him with its talons or fangs. It died, but it surprising weight kept the scout pinned down. Ezri wrestled with its corpse, but failed to free himself before another slathering monster appeared, its jaws open to rip off his face.

    A blast from Osher’s shotgun disintegrated the gargoyle’s head. He kicked the dead tyranid off of his brother and Ezri rolled to his feet. He tried to wipe the gargoyle’s gore from his eyes with the back of his hand as Osher’s gun boomed again and killed another tyranid.

    “I’m out!” Osher yelled as he racked the shotgun’s slide and pulled the trigger with no satisfactory result.

    Ezri slashed the arm off of a gargoyle that had tried to maul him, but he could not go to his comrade’s aid. As another tyranid pounced at him, Osher took the barrel of his weapon in both hands and, with a yell, swung it into the gargoyle. Its head was crushed and such was the force of the blow that its dead body was thrown off of the roof. Osher raised his improvised cudgel again, but immediately dropped it as a mass of fleshborer beetles hit him and another gargoyle jumped on his back. It knocked him down, biting and clawing at his armor, and burned through to his flesh with bio-plasma.

    As his scout-brother went down screaming, Ezri dove atop the gargoyle that had felled Osher and ripped it apart with the help of his combat knife. An immese pain in his calf caused him to look down and find that a tyranid had slashed his leg open with a scything talon. He stabbed it in the head and its death throes jerked the combat blade out of his hand. As it died, Ezri saw that it was a hormagaunt. The realization that he was no longer fighting only gargoyles drove a spike of despair through his fury and he was tempted to give up and let the tyranids take him down. A sound cut through the alien screeches, the flapping of membranous wings, and Scout Osher’s cries of pain. Astartes jump packs, their retros pushed to full, put a spark of hope back into him.
    Last edited by Try Again Bragg; 07-05-2009 at 15:29. Reason: Added two paragraphs.
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    Re: A Matter of Honour

    Wow.I wish there was more to it nore quickly.

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