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    Authors' note: i'm not brilliant at fight scenes so im sorry if its not quite up to scratch with the rest of the stroy so far.

    Castor walked purposefully along the magnificent hallway his ornate sword at his hip. He was still in his dress uniform from earlier though explosions had coated it in a fine layer of dust. His shoes impacting the marble floor echoed ominously through the darkness. He would win and he would show them all how good a leader, a warrior and solider he was. No longer did his eyes shine they were now the same eyes that all real soldiers had, cold and focused.

    Deitre strode forward towards the picture room his bodyguard trailing upon his heels. He would show that upstart Castor what it meant to be a soldier, warrior or what ever that young upstart thought he was. He wore the traditional clothing from his home world, a long grey overcoat decorated in numerous medal and awards. A small knife sat nestled in the small of his back. It was concealed by the animal pelt draped across his shoulders. A ceremonial staff was fastened to his hip tracking side to side as he walked.

    Castor rounded the corner his mind focused his nerves steeled. To his right stood the inquisitor who had started all of this, his retinue stood half concealed by the shadows. To his right stood his own command squad their eyes fixed upon their leader. As he went to pass them the inquisitor stepped out and stopped him, in his hands he held a casket the size of a man's leg. The inquisitors hands were held open as if gesturing for Castor to take it but why would that be?

    Deitre stood before the picture rooms' great entrance, the doors were at least fifteen feet high. Each bared half the imperial eagle, one half had a gem in its talons. Inside the gem from what Deitre could discern was the domain of the imperium of man. In the other talon a hooded skull could be clearly seen. This deeply unnerved Deitre as it felt like the skull was staring straight through his soul. He quickly recovered his nerve and marched towards the doors. As he reached them several of his subordinates forced open the doors to let him pass. Light spilled into the hallway blinding Deitre but he carried on as the doors swung shut behind him.

    Castor stood on the opposite side of the room to him his hand resting upon his ornate sword. At his feet sat an opened casket. The wood it was made from looked very old possibly several centuries. Deitre caught a hint of cushioned lining and red felt, an ornate box for an ornate sword Deitre thought. In the centre of the room stood inquisitor Brouge his hands resting atop his daemon hammer.

    Almost as one Deitre and Castor strode towards the inquisitor both intent on coming away as the victor. Then both stopped about a arms length away from the inquisitor, waiting for him to move or say what he had to say. Brouge looked at each one in turn then cleared his throat and began “May the emperors light guide his champions' blade to strike straight and true. Let the ritual commence.” Brouge hefted his daemon hammer onto his shoulder and turned walking towards the edge of the room. His heavy boots resounding off the marble floor.

    Castor waited for Deitre to make the first move and luckily he didn't have to wait long, Deitre charged one hand clasped tightly round the haft of his staff while the other hand hung back round by the clip fastening the staff to his overcoat. Castor shifted his weight onto his right foot before drawing his own sword in one clean movement, the blade glistening in the artificial light that rained down upon it.

    Deitre unclipped the staff and brought it above his head deftly, he swung it down aiming for Castors' head. Castor in response brought his sword arm up to block the strike with his sword. The clash of steel on steel rang out as the two weapons met. Because of the way Castor had positioned himself along with how he'd shifted his weight, Deitres' attack rotated him round his right foot sending Deitre sprawling to the floor as his staff glanced off Castors' blade.

    Deitre quickly recovered rolling onto his back to avoid Castors' follow up attack, then throwing himself back onto his feet his staff down at his side ready for Castors' next move.

    Castor spun bringing his blade upwards in a aggressive stance, his finger resting on the activation stub that sat nested in the ornate Not yet he thought to himself.

    Both men stared at each other trying to predict the others next move, would they charge to put the other on the defensive or would they open themselves up to a charge only to parry and then launch their own retaliatory strike.

    Castor was the first to act, he sprinted the twenty feet that now separated them in a split second. His form rearing up over Deitre, the sword flashing down. Deitre brought his staff up in a swift, sharp movement, blocking Castors' strike. Now both men where face to face, each being able to see the hate and determination in the others eyes. Both where struggling to gain the upper hand in this battle of brute force, neither being able to push the other back.

    Then a silver flash caught Castors' eye. He had just enough time to drop away before the combat knife whistle past his forehead. Now Castor was on the defensive and he needed to get in to a position to put himself back on the attack but with Deitre bearing down on him he had little choice but to parry him away until that opportunity arose.

    Another powerful blow knocked Castor to his knees, his sword arm was getting weaker, he didn't know how much longer he could keep this up. The unrelenting assault by Deitre was just brutal, not allowing for a moment to recover. Once more the combat knife lashed out but this time Castor caught the blade with his own, while simultaneously grabbing Deitres' staff. Now both men were once again face to face, trying to force the other one into submission. With a deft flick of his wrist Castor forced Deitres' blade from his grasp. This gave Castor the upper hand but Deitre was not yet finished.

    He let the his arm slack bringing the blade and staff close, brining Castor along with it. Deitre grabbed Castors' wrist stopping him from bring his blade to bear. Then he kicked up reversing their positions, now Castor was being forced into the ground by the weight of Deitre pushing down upon him. Slowly but surely the staff was coming down upon Castors' neck, soon Deitre would be able to strangle him with it, he had to act fast. Sudldenly he remembered Deitres' move from earlier, he let his lefty arm slack, while at the same time sliding out from under Deitre. As the staff slammed into the marble floor Castor unleashed a left hook that caught Deitre square in the jaw., knocking them apart.

    Castor quickly scramble for his sword, at first fumbling to get a hold of the hilt loosing precious second doing so. When he eventually grasped the hilt he swung it round in a wide ark brining it down where he thought Deitre was. The sword clattered harmlessly off the solid floor, as soon as he realised he'd missed Castor instinctively rolled away just escaping Deitres' attack. He spun on his heals bringing the blade forward ready to strike.

    He lunged for Deitre once more his blade being blocked by Deitres' staff. Deitre then forced castor back exposing his opponents ribs to a brutal kick, knocking the wind out of Castor. Castor now was on the floor one hand clutching his stomach while the other held on to his sword defiantly. He looked up to see Deitres' staff coming down on him in a wide, loping crescent towards Castors face. Castor just managed to roll out from under the attack. While the force of the attack buried the staff deep into the marble flooring.

    Now was Castors chance, he rolled once more onto his knees brining him upwards to face his opponent once again. He took a deep breath before running straight at Deitre his sword shimmering with an unsaturated force. Deitre just managed to pull his staff from the floor before Castors sword connected. Both weapons met creating a almighty crash, just as Castor pressed down on the activation stub.

    The shimmering blade shattered into hundreds of fluttering shards. Deitre reared up monomolecular sharps sheared through his carapace armour, punching right through his back. Deitre roared like a wounded animal, slashing widely at his opponent. Castor weathered the first few blows before rolling out from beneath Deitre. Castor stared at Deitre his face was gouged with deep red lines and his overcoat slowly stained a dark red. Almost as one the shards died and they fell to the floor.

    Castor sat several feet away from Deitre breathing heavily, he was exhausted. Slowly he heard the ominous armoured footsteps of inquisitor Brouge. He looked over to see the inquisitor standing beside him, his hammer resting across both hands. Suddenly he saw the inquisitors' hands move tilting the shaft of the hammer towards him. He shut his eyes and prayed for the emperors forgiveness.

    The sudden crack of steel upon marble jolted his eyes wide. To his right the shaft of the daemon hammer was embedded into the marble floor next to castor. Slowly he followed the shaft to see Brouges' hand outstretched gesturing to help the weary trooper up onto his feet. Castor gladly accepted the offer and was quickly upon his feet standing shoulder to shoulder with the inquisitor.

    The inquisitor clapped his hands twice to signify the end of the dual. Soon both doors were opened to reveal to the others who had won the dual. Deitres' command squad were one of the hundred or so who rushed into the picture room as soon as the doors opened. Intent on congratulating their lord but once they saw him lying stricken upon the marble floor they immediately hurried over to to him. As they tended to his wounds Castor slowly walked over accompanied by his command squad. Both forces locked eyes and stared as Castor walked over to his once opponents squad.

    He stared at them for a long second before brandishing their masters staff. He then proceeded to place it on Deitres' chest, as a sign of respect. With this the command squad respectively bowed before rushing off to tend to Deitres' injuries.

    Castor slowly walked over to his command squad clutching his ribs as he walked, the fight had taken its toll on Castor. As he reached them his will failed and so did his ability to stand, stumbling he collapsed into the arms of his second. Shutting his weary eyes he knew that the emperor had chosen him as his champion and the emperor be dammed he would become the saviour of Khaml.

    As he watched Castor being hurried off to a medic station, Brouge smiled. He knew he'd backed the better horse, from the start. Now all he had to do was hold down the fort while he recovered but first he'd pay another visit to Shaw and Elane. He strode off wandering how much longer the Angels of vengeance would be, because he knew soon the forces surrounding him would fail and only the pure ferocity of the Adaptus Astartes would be able so save their souls.


    Primary EDITER: Magicmonkey
    Secondry EDITER: Agriss
    Writer: Fox Of 9

    Hope you enjoy. all feedback welcome.

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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    magic swords are cheating. he should be disqualified
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    hey Deitre Hid a knife upon his person.... .
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    thats intelligence, not cheating. like bringing an extra knife to a knife fight, as opposed to bringing a machine gun.
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    Great Story Fox of 9, and Magic Monkey, its not magic, just exploding .

    I wish I could write like that.
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    expoding is magic. if your from 2,000 years ago. but everyone knows the imperirium has gone back in time since billions are sacrificed to the emperor for protection (aztecs) and the ultramarines are like romans. exploding is magic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by magicmonkey View Post
    expoding is magic. if your from 2,000 years ago. but everyone knows the imperirium has gone back in time since billions are sacrificed to the emperor for protection (aztecs) and the ultramarines are like romans. exploding is magic.
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    Hate to disagree but exploding is a divine gift from the machine god, shooting lazers out of your eyes is magic.

    Edit: I suppose doom used by the SM Librarian is also phycic or magic and it explodes, so I may have to give you this one
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    I haven't finished reading the first post yet but the top one on this page is quite good. Inquisitors are always provide interesting source material
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    hey sorry for lack of updates just left school & i wont be able to update for two weeks as i go on holiday tuesday. will work while on holiday, so i hopefully will have a update when i return.

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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    have fun in (insert holiday destination here) (insert above persons name here) and let us know when you get back from (insert above persons current residence here)!
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    hi still loving the algarve (in portugal) have done a little bit of writing as its hard to pull myself away from the pool :P

    anyway on with the 'preview'

    The blast doors opened as he approached, the rams sliding them open effortlessly. He continued his heavily armoured footsteps echoing off the steel floor and marble walls. The turned right down a side corridor passing several servitors as he walked.

    After several hundred meters he arrived at another set of doors but these were different to the several sets of blast doors he had already past these were ornately decorated. They where covered in hundreds of carved images that all surrounded the giant imperial aquila. the giant doors each bared half the imperial eagle had, one half held the imperial gem tightly in its talons while the other clutched the chapters emblem the hooded skull. To the left and right of the door stood two guards clad in ornamental power armour two giant axes resting at their feet. He shifted his eyes back onto the chapter emblem and stared for several long seconds remembering all it stood for, before walking forward the guards opening the door for him as he approached.

    As the doors parted light and sound flowed out drowning any previous noises that had filled the hallway. As he crossed the threshold between the hallway and the room beyond the doors slowly closed until he could no longer be seen from the hallway.
    enjoy and suggestions welcome.
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    Leaving us in suspense I see
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    The blast doors opened as he approached, the rams sliding them open effortlessly. He continued his heavily armoured footsteps echoing off the steel floor and marble walls. The turned right down a side corridor passing several servitors as he walked each a horrible combination of flesh and steel. He was repulsed by their presence but he tolerated their existence as he knew they fulfilled important roles that helped keep their chapter alive.

    After several hundred meters he arrived at another set of doors but these were different to the several sets of blast doors he had already past these were ornately decorated. They where covered in hundreds of carved images that all surrounded the giant imperial aquila. the giant doors each bared half the imperial eagle had, one half held the imperial gem tightly in its talons while the other clutched the chapters emblem the hooded skull. To the left and right of the door stood two guards clad in ornamental power armour two giant axes resting at their feet. He shifted his eyes back onto the chapter emblem and stared for several long seconds remembering all it stood for, before walking forward the guards opening the door for him as he approached.

    As the doors parted light and sound flowed out drowning any previous noises that had filled the hallway. As he crossed the threshold between the hallway and the room beyond the doors slowly closed until he could no longer be seen from the hallway.



    Brouge sat alone in the room, his daemon hammer resting atop the nearby marble pedestal. The room was almost void of furniture apart from the thick wooden chair that Brouge sat slouched in and the solid marble pedestal that his daemon hammer rested atop. His thoughts wandered throughout the vast corridors of his mind. He knew that he would have to come up with a plan of action soon, the defences would not hold out forever against the combined might of the cultist hoard and the fallen Khamlalian regiments.

    For he knew that the fire of resistance was all but extinguished in the hearts of most of the men that resided within the governors spire but one hope remained, the angels of vengeance should be arriving in orbit within the hour and then the war would have truly begun.
    not sure if this follows on OK. what do you guys & girls think??

    anyway next update hopefully should happen before next friday. :P

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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    put a line of *********** between it or something so we know its a scene change. that is an idea. also i cant wait till friday. so you will send it to me on thursday for reviewing please.
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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    The blast doors opened as he approached, the rams sliding them open effortlessly. As he continued his heavily armoured footsteps echoing off the steel floor and marble walls. He turned right down a side corridor passing several servitors as he walked each a horrible combination of flesh and steel. He was repulsed by their presence but he tolerated their existence as he knew they fulfilled important roles that helped keep their chapter alive.

    After several hundred meters he arrived at another set of doors but these were different to the several sets of blast doors he had already passed for these were ornately decorated. They where covered in hundreds of carved images that all surrounded the giant imperial aquila. the giant doors each bared half the imperial eagle had, one half held the imperial gem tightly in its talons while the other clutched the chapters emblem, the hooded skull. To the left and right of the door stood two guards clad in ornamental power armour, two giant axes resting at their feet. He shifted his eyes back onto the chapter emblem and stared for several long seconds remembering all it stood for, before walking forward the guards opening the door for him as he approached.

    As the doors parted light and sound flowed out drowning any previous noises that had filled the hallway. As he crossed the threshold between the hallway and the room beyond the doors slowly closed until he could no longer be seen from the hallway.

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    Brouge sat alone in the room, his daemon hammer resting atop the nearby marble pedestal. The room was almost void of furniture apart from the thick wooden chair that Brouge sat slouched in and the solid marble pedestal that his daemon hammer rested atop. His thoughts wandered throughout the vast corridors of his mind. He knew that he would have to come up with a plan of action soon, the defences would not hold out forever against the combined might of the cultist hoard and the fallen Khamlalian regiments.

    For he knew that the spark of resistance was all but extinguished in the hearts of most of the men that resided within the governors spire but one hope remained, the Angels of Vengeance should be arriving in orbit within the hour and then the war would have truly begun.

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    As the doors shut behind him Micheal Gabriel stared forward coldly into the empty void of space. He stood upon the bridge of the Wrathspire battle barge, which was anchored just behind Khamls' second moon, Serrania. Out of range of the planets orbital defence station, though antiquated the stations guns could do vast amounts of damage to the Wrathspire if they let it catch them unaware.

    “Nervous?” a voice behind him questioned, the tone almost mocking Gabriel.

    Gabriel turned to see Captain Theodore Vatrex, Captain of the fourth company standing behind him, his command squad just off to his side. Each one a veteran of a hundred wars, boasted several visible scars. Both Gabriel and Vatrex had served the angels of vengeance for over a century and were also very close friends.

    Gabriel frowned, he knew Vatrex liked to tease but he had never fallen foul of it on the precipice of such an important campaign.

    “Stop being such a kill joy Gabriel.” Vatrex remarked, his arms open wide. Gabriel smirked and embraced Vatrex, crushing him with a superhuman bear hug.

    “Glad to see you too” Vatrex croaked, mockingly, as both men broke apart.

    “Now that that’s out of the way, down to business.” A voice boomed from the shadows.

    Both men turned simultaneously to face the newcomer. Standing over to the side flanked by his command squad, stood Luthor Von Krieg captain of the fifth company and commander of the Wrathspire.

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    Brouge stirred slowly. He placed his hand to his brow, propping up his head as it hung heavily upon his shoulders. He ran his hand up through his hair slowly, his movements slow and lethargic. The constant need to be battle ready had taken it's toll on the inquisitor.

    As the gears in his mind began to turn, he became aware of the other person in the room. They sat slumped against the floor, the figures outline showed that they had one arm held tightly across their chest in a sling while they’re other arm hung limply at they’re side.

    Brouge smiled to himself. He wished that Shaw would of taken the time to recover fully but he was glad to have such a dependable man back at his side. With that he slowly propped himself up on his arms and pushed himself out of the thick wood chair he had dosed off in.

    He walked over to the balcony window, grabbing his daemon hammer off the marble pedestal that it rested atop. He grasped the wood door frame and pushed as gently as he could, as not to wake Shaw. As the doors parted the cool night air that rushed in was a welcome relief from the hot stuffy cramped corridors of the governors spire.

    The balcony was on the twentieth floor and over looked the vast gardens below and the river Vamos beyond that. The gardens below where littered with numerous abandoned imperial vehicles, some sat smouldering illuminating the ruined hedges and shattered earthworks. The river beyond shimmered in the orange light that was emitted from the burning hive beyond that.

    The whole hive burned, it's inhabitants slaughtered as a sacrifice to the dark gods.

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    The three captains sat around the tactical map of the orbital defence station, the holo projection was also accompanied by several data feeds that detailed the stations history and capabilities. From the data they had at hand, they could tell, that in a head on attack the Wrathspire would be heavily damaged but would come out of the conflict as the victor.

    This displeased both Gabriel and Vatrex who believed the damage that the battle barge would receive would put her in danger if the enemy had any way of counter-attacking. They both believed that they should use the Wrathspires' Gershwin pattern ship teleporter to teleport them along side the orbital defence station and then unleash a devastating broadside, rendering the station inoperable or destroying it outright.

    Luthor was not as sure as his fellow captains that their plan could work, for two reasons. Firstly ship teleporters were not know for their accurate even at this range and second the Gershwin pattern that the Wrathspire used where very temperamental, a very precise awakening ritual had to be performed and if a single mistake was made the ship could reappear several centuries later in a different part of space or never at all. He admitted that these were desperate times and they needed to act soon but he did not think risking the lives of three hundred space marines was worth it.

    “No!” He exclaimed slamming his fist down, causing the holo image to blur and pixel-ate.

    “I will not risk my ship and the lives of my men by allowing you to use the ships' teleporter.” He continued, rising from his seat.

    “The reduction in damage is negligible and the increase in risk for this is not acceptable!” His eyes burned with the same ferociousness that all true sons of Vengeance had deep within them.

    Both captains were shocked, they knew of Luthors' fiery temper but they had never known him to loose his cool at such a critical stage of a campaign before.

    Gabriel placed his arms gently atop the table and rested his head upon his interlocked hands. For several long seconds he stared deeply at the enraged captain, then he lifted his head off his hands and subtlety gestured for him to sit down. Slowly Luthor lower himself back down into his seat as well as regaining his composure.

    After this Gabriel spoke, his words where hushed and each conveyed the up most importance. “Brother do we not risk our lives everyday as part of our service to the emperor?” he paused for a second before continuing.

    “The answer is yes, we do. We risk our lives every single day and without that risk that we take there would so many less victories for the great imperium of man. It is the taking of that risk and coming out victorious that makes us Adaptus Astartes.” Upon finishing Gabriel once again rested his head upon his hands and gently closed his eyes waiting for Luthors' reply.

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    Brouge still stood on the balcony, his arms outstretched bracing himself upon the balcony wall. The hive beyond the river still burned and the gardens that surrounded the governors spire still smouldered with the ruins of countless imperial vehicles. He slowly shifted his gaze from the war torn earth that surrounded him to the peaceful serenity of the night sky.

    Even though he new of all the evil and depravity of the universe he still found the stars intrinsically beautiful. He stared at them for a long while before releasing his grasp on the balcony wall. As he turned he took one last glimpse at the star lit night sky.

    Returning into the dark, stuffy room he quickly went about preparing for the day break. They would return with their full force, almost a whole planets worth of people. Before him a fairly large wooden box lay, fairly plain in design, bland except for one carving on the lid, the inquisitorial seal.
    Reaching down he grasped the solid padlock that kept the boxes contents locked away safely, almost instinctively he entered the code, the lock pinging open as he completed it.

    Inside the box was empty except for a single silver cloth draped over a box roughly the size of an infants casket. Slowly Brouge rubbed the silver linen, with a deep sigh he tore the cover away from the box. The casket now unveiled could be seen, it was very plain with the inquisitorial seal of the lid as with it container but there the similarities ended.

    The casket was covered top to bottom in chains which seemed to be burning the casket, causing the wood to blister and warp. The chains where forged out of holy silver and were covered in holy scriptures was etched into the metal of the chains. Brouge placed his hand atop the casket he could feel the power pulsating through the wood and chains, even their holy power was not enough to stop its energies seeping through. Brouge sighed once more, hoping against hope that he would not have to use it, for it would surely damn him for eternity.

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    Meanwhile a dark presence stirred in the ancient caves of Khamls' desert. It cloud feel the hatred and blood lust of warring planet, slowly it collected the strongest and most powerful of all these emotions drawing strength from them. Soon it thought, soon.


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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    Yay im in the credits of something else. i have been in other credits for much better work before however. honestly
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    Preview time

    She could feel the cold dew soaked ground cushion her footfall as she sprinted across the open ground towards the governors spire. Her shadow danced off the ground as the burning wrecks smouldered in the cold evening air. Quickly she darted behind one such wreck to avoid a high powered spotlight that swept across the grounds. Looking up she quickly gathered where her master was, she had always had a knack of knowing exactly where her master was. Almost as if they where linked on some psychic level.

    Rolling on to her stomach she slowly crawled forwards to get a view of the ground ahead. To her left a set of emplacements sat abandoned, their occupant had died or retreated further into the grounds. To her left a cratered wasteland, littered with the dead of both sides, their remains left to rot in the summer heat.
    Enjoy. :P
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    it is a shame shes a ghost
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    just started so not much to look at working on it though.

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    Re: The Angels Of Vengeance. A collection of short stories.

    sorry i'm taking so long. struggerling with writers block. and everything i write i hate. '-_-'
    so im about 1/2 - 2/3 of the way through it.

    trying really hard to get it done (to a good standard) so you can enjoy it. so just bear* with me a little longer.


    *pun intended.


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