
Originally Posted by
Xisor
I don't disagree - but I also think I perhaps didn't convey myself rightly.
I'm more worried about the placing of Babu & Oll, their inclusion in TOD & KNF. I understand their relevancy and, to tell the truth, I really do like the notion of them, but they seem...shoehorned into events. Their stories, in my humble opinion, the very ideas of them merit more than being side-notes and (almost) afterthoughts as part of the backdrop of something far greater.
I distinctly remember (though with no clue as to where the mention is for verification) that the Ordo Malleus is said to predate the Imperium. We should start to see them. By rights, they ought to be out there, in the background. But it'd be silly to have a section of a chapter in Horus Rising dedicated to an OM agent simply because they happened to be present at one of the briefings.
Similarly, I think Oll's story and Babu's story would have worked better if they were done...Kasper-style in Prospero Burns, or in the style of Legion. That is: dedicated to that story, adding a new angle on other things.
With the way it's done in KNF and TOD I don't think it's executed so...skillfully. There's an edge of dissatisfaction about it that I can't quite put my finger on other than saying 'they seem out of place'. They're more than cameos, and it's both stealing the limelight from the rest of the book and diminishing the worth that's given to them; too...diluted. (The examples I gave - Dorn, Loken/Tarvitz/Garro/Fabius are much more...agreeable.)
Having said all that, it could be a question of balance. The earlier cameos & 'special guest star appearances' were perhaps not quite enough, I'm confident a more pleasing equilibrium can be reached!