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    The Biotransference - a Necrontyr short story

    Hi,

    This is the first story I've written in English so I apologize in advance if I hurt your eyes. Please do point out any mistake you see, or if anything feels off, I'd like to know. I've already posted it on another forum but I see Warseer's back, that's good news!

    Thank you.

    P.S.: here's a link to the .pdf file with proper formatting: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9...W04S2huckp2Unc


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    Re: The Biotransference - a Necrontyr short story

    I'll take a look and post fb.

    Thanks for posting on our site
    Originally posted by Lord Damocles
    New Girl is the best girl.

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    Re: The Biotransference - a Necrontyr short story

    I liked it. Liked the twist in the ending very much. Would be good to read more
    Originally posted by Lord Damocles
    New Girl is the best girl.

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    Re: The Biotransference - a Necrontyr short story

    Quote Originally Posted by Teh Real New Girl View Post
    Thanks for posting on our site
    I love Warseer, so I was sad to see it down for so long. Happy to see it back though. Thank you for reading. (:

    Quote Originally Posted by Teh Real New Girl View Post
    I liked it. Liked the twist in the ending very much. Would be good to read more
    I'm glad you liked it! What can I say, I think there's so much potential in the C'tan, even if it's a slippery slope... I'll definitely write more, though it'll most likely be longer than this. I'll probably post it in episodes and see how that goes.

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    Re: The Biotransference - a Necrontyr short story

    Well done with the writing.

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