Dogs of War 2000 point List Version 2.0

[Freak Ona Leash]

This is my second Dogs of War list, as my old one needed some revising. This one i think is better and more fluffy, though I've been thinking of swapping out the
Truthsayer for a Dark Emissary(better spells and are Level 4 compared to level 3) and maybe take out a Fen Beast and the Light Cav to make room for Voland's Venators to add the extra punch.

(Note: The pikemen are supposed to be Albion clansmen with spears and the Norse marauders are the General's bodyguards. Just for reference form a fluff perspective. And the paymaster is a Dwarf.)
Dogs of War Army List Characters-
Cormac McEoin-Mercenary General, Heavy Armour, Sword of Might, Enchanted Shield. 136 points.
Angus the Wise-Truthsayer. 265 points.
Fearghus McNiall-Mercenary Captain, Great Weapon, Heavy Armour. 58 points.
Hazgrim Ironforge-Paymaster, Heavy Armour, Great Weapon. 62 points.
Character point total-421 points.
Dogs of War Army List Core-
Clan McEibhar-20 Pikemen, Full command. 230 points.
Clan McNiall- 20 Pikemen, Full command. 230 points.
Clan McNiall Outriders- 6 Light Cavalry, Full command, Spear, Shield. 129 points.
Duelists- 10 duelists, shields. 60 points.
Duelists- 10 duelists, two hand weapons. 70 points.
Core point total-689 points.
Dogs of War Army List Special-
The Sons of Death-25 Norse Marauders, 2 hand weapons, Standard, Musician. 268 points.
The Hammerbeards-25 Dwarf Mercenaries, Shield, Heavy Armour, Full command. 256 points.
Special point total-518 points.
Dogs of War Army List Rare-
Fen Beasts- 3 Fen Beasts, 255 points
Rare point total-255 points.
Grand Army Total- 2000 points.
Sooooooo, how is it?
EDIT: That better?

[Darmort]

Dark Emmisary is great.
Fenbeasts look cool, keep them, after all, this is an Albion list,

I see you like large units, this can be your downfall, in a sence, preferably, make all units 20, or 19 if a Hero's with them, and add a few units to flank.
On the Dwarfs, I'd take off Great Weapons and give them Shields for a 3+ Armour Save, but that's just me.



And too your Sig, yes, I do. It's something about the first and last letter making you understand the whole word....
Darmort

[Freak Ona Leash]

Mmmmm, Drak Esirmasy, Hehe Hmm, dropping all my units down in size and giving the Dwarfs shields would give me enough room for I think another unit of Duelists or two. Or a unit of Light Cavalry. Hm, but with pikes I think it is best to have large unit sizes because you fight in four ranks and therefore can have up to 20 attacks in a 4X5 formation. Decisions, decisions...

[Darmort]

I just noticed the Duellists, if you can, give some of them Pistols, they work wonders like that. If not, get more Free COmpany and arm them with some Pistols, :-P
Pikemen are best used in 20's, although I admit at once using 36 in a single unit... boy that was fun, :-)
Shields on the Dwarfs would give them the ability to take on Chaos, by the way, something that's rare these days.

[Freak Ona Leash]

Uh, I dont get free company. And I dont think duelists get pistols. Even if they did, it doesnt go with the fluff of them being Albionites. Hmm, imagine it "Oi, Liam! How do yae werk this feckin' thing? Uh, well Oi tink yeh press that tyhing roight tha...*BOOM* 'Ey Liam! It worked!...Liam?