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Old 17-01-2007, 19:27   #1
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That would be teh ironical as Sylass is usually the blamee not the blamer.
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Old 17-01-2007, 21:00   #2
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First things first- thanks a lot for all the efforts! This really looks great- while I do like the other magazine *gasp* I really appreciate the greater amount of depth you guys go into with your articles.

If I may make two suggestions, however, I would first see if it is possible to break this down into multiple downloads much like The Firebase is. I realize the difficulties that cropped up with this initial posting, but just a future idea. The second suggestion was that while the selection of Warhammer Fantasy was AMAZING (did you even leave any WHFB army?), I noticed there was a lack of other fantasy GW systems (a la LOTR). Again, I realize this initial effort was headed up by only a small handful of people, so I am sure this will be a non-issue the next time around

You guys really threw the gauntlet down for the boys at WD to get back to the basics of cranking out LEGITIMATE, HIGH QUALITY articles. Congrats!
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Old 17-01-2007, 21:35   #3
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Why should LOTR be in a WHFB magazine?
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Old 17-01-2007, 22:38   #4
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I agree with the last comment. Although LOTR is a fantasy game, it is a game on it's own. The only thing connecting WHFB and LOTR is that GW make them. Great magazine btw guys. Good work
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Old 17-01-2007, 22:55   #5
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Congratulations to everyone involved, it was a great read.

Glad you persevered through the problems, it was worth the wait & can't wait for the next issue!
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Old 18-01-2007, 00:49   #6
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Downloading it atm, will update this post with feedback when I've read it wich'll be tomorrow.

Damn I wanna read it now, but school's tomorrow and the time here is 01:46.

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Old 18-01-2007, 02:51   #7
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Well, I guess I misinterpreted things. My thoughts were that this was supposed to encompass all fantasy (little 'F') related material while The Fire Base covered the Sci-Fi aspects of GW (40k and Necromunda). There was (albeit brief) a mentioning of Mordheim, so was just curious if there were plans to include LOTR as well.
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Old 18-01-2007, 03:39   #8
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The mag is covering Warhammer Fantasy.

This will include WFB (primarialy), Mordheim, and Warmaster (Assuming we can find articles for it.)

Mordheim WILL make a big showing in issue 2.
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Old 18-01-2007, 09:37   #9
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Thanks for a great magazine. It was as good a read as the last 10 of the ”other” magazine put together. Can’t wait for the next issue.

Fantasy are all the games that take place in the Warhammer World: Fantasy Battle, Mordheim, Blood Bowl, Warmaster, Warhammer Quest and Man O’ War.
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Old 18-01-2007, 10:31   #10
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Excellent work chaps.

A couple of suggestions though - you might want to consider compressing the background images somewhat - whilst they really add the the polished look, they are really bulking out download size, and make page browsing in adobe much slower! Also, consider doing a fade on the backdrops (50% opacitiy maybe?) this will make the text in front far easier to read.

On the same note, the battle report was great, but the pictures where overcompressed, lossing defenition and making it hard to tell which unit was which. Nice format though!

There are a lot of cunning tricks you can do with adobe to ensure you get the best quality for the lowest file sizes - with a bit of optimisation I reckon you could have this issue down to 10 meg, and have a lot of the pictures looking a good bit sharper.

Content wise though - awesome. Keep it up.

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Thank you for all the comments guys!
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Well, I guess I misinterpreted things. My thoughts were that this was supposed to encompass all fantasy (little 'F') related material while The Fire Base covered the Sci-Fi aspects of GW (40k and Necromunda). There was (albeit brief) a mentioning of Mordheim, so was just curious if there were plans to include LOTR as well.
As TKitch said, primarily we will be looking solely at games based in the Warhammer World.
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Just downloaded. I´ll read it ASAP.
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Well, here or there, it was still a very good product altogether. Great job!
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Please direct all comments to the Watchman Issue #1 Feedback Thread, and please vote in the poll.

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Old 18-01-2007, 23:29   #15
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Very nicely written! Well done! However, even though I saved it to my computer, it still took FOREVER to load up, and even when I was reading it, frequently froze up for a couple minutes. Would it be possible for you to publish the Watchman in smaller portions? Other than that, great work, keep it up!
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Thank you for all the comments guys!

As TKitch said, primarily we will be looking solely at games based in the Warhammer World.
And as I said, I understand your point. I do think its a little disappointing that this will be left out as almost all of the other GW ranges will be covered in some respect. Oh well. I guess it's just me
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Ok, well this was a good read. Most of the content was enjoyable. But there were some small editing errors that made it confusing in parts, like in the "army for all phases' article you pretty much had two pages of almost exactly the same text, repeating the paragraphs about the mages and dark riders and whatnot. As well as parts of sentences and paragraphs that end up "missing" between pages or columns throughout the whole thing. And sometimes the background made it hard to read the text, as suggested earlier, making the background more translusent would help out. If you can keep on top of those you'l have yourself a top notch webzine.
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I really enjoyed reading this!

There are a few tweaks that can be made, as have been identified in some of the previous posts, but bearing in mind this is the first ever Watchman produced I'm really impressed with the content and style.

To all involved a very much deserved WELL DONE!

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Very enjoyable, and for a firs t issue a great start!

one thing on teh bretonnian tactica, the Virtue knightly Temper cannot be combined with teh heartwood lance as it states that characters must be armes with a mndane weapon wit that virtue. Tut tut.

Other than that it was a great read. WEll done!
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There are certain things that they have to take for granted that people already know, or the rulebook would be 15 volumes.

You might notice that they don't point out that players have to breathe occasionally, either.
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not to complain..well perhaps..wasn't much to complain on to begin with..perhaps in the next issue you coul add a table of context? whats on page what etc?
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